it looks really good but some critiques i have for you is:
1.look at the eyes closely… they don’t seem to me like there looking at the same thing almost as if one was lazy so what i would do is when your drawing it line everything up then lightly sketch it then once you have everything the way you want it is when you go over it with either sharpies or just use your pencil and make the lines more noticeable and add shading… you know the rest ; )
[btw you did an awesome job on the shading it looks really good and you can easily tell where the light fixture is coming from. which says a lot because there are plenty of people who don't shade right]
2.the hair looks good not saying you have to or should do this but what i find that works is first lightly outline the hair the do individual strokes
the way the hair is so you get a more natural feel
other than that i really like your style of art it looks really nice just fix up those few things and you’ll really have something great going on.
i know sometimes it seems like i am just pointing out a lot of flaws and comes across as a dick thing to do but quite honestly you are just flowing with potential and i want to try and help that along. have been studying, analyzing, and making art for almost 14 years now so its hard for me not to notice somethings lol :b
it looks really good but some critiques i have for you is:
1.look at the eyes closely… they don’t seem to me like there looking at the same thing almost as if one was lazy so what i would do is when your drawing it line everything up then lightly sketch it then once you have everything the way you want it is when you go over it with either sharpies or just use your pencil and make the lines more noticeable and add shading… you know the rest ; )
[btw you did an awesome job on the shading it looks really good and you can easily tell where the light fixture is coming from. which says a lot because there are plenty of people who don't shade right]
2.the hair looks good not saying you have to or should do this but what i find that works is first lightly outline the hair the do individual strokes
the way the hair is so you get a more natural feel
other than that i really like your style of art it looks really nice just fix up those few things and you’ll really have something great going on.
i know sometimes it seems like i am just pointing out a lot of flaws and comes across as a dick thing to do but quite honestly you are just flowing with potential and i want to try and help that along. have been studying, analyzing, and making art for almost 14 years now so its hard for me not to notice somethings lol :b